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English Correction: Design Feedback (Batch 1)
First the image logo doesn't appear.
First, the image logo isn't appearing.
Why?
"Doesn't appear" implies it never happens (general fact). "Isn't appearing" (present continuous)
is better for a bug you are observing right now.
I don't want the sentence like "Will Choo Mi-ae 2026 Gyeonggi Province Gubernatorial
Election Winner?"
I want to avoid phrasing like "Will Choo Mi-ae...".
Why?
"The sentence like" is slightly unnatural. "Phrasing like" or "A sentence like" is better. "I want to
avoid" is a polite but firm way to give negative design feedback.
just outcome text would be good
Using just the outcome text would be better.
we need to process the market creation should be in batch process in the api server
We need to handle market creation as a batch process on the API server.
Why?
You proposed the solution ("batch process") directly. "Handle X as Y" is a strong pattern for technical
proposals.
make a user or admin so incovient
makes it very inconvenient for the user or admin.
Spelling & Grammar
Subject is "creating market" (singular) -> "makes" (singular). Spelling: "inconvenient".